Rough Production schedule

Rough AS schedule, i feel i don't have much skills, but gonna try my best, i don't want to be useless to the group, would really like feedback so we can figure out what time is good for everyone.

BAR11script

Script Idea
By Raven Maipi-Tukere

Version 1


EXT: GIRLFRIEND'S BEDROOM. SUNNY SATURDAY AFTERNOON

PANS DOWN FROM WINDOW TO BEDROOM DOOR.

MID SHOT: BOYFRIEND ENTERS THE ROOM LOOKING AROUND. HE WALKS TO THE DRAW UNIT AND FINDS THE KEYS.

CLOSE UP: PANS FROM BOYFRIEND'S HAND TO HIS CONFUSED FACE.

CLOSE UP: A BOOK LIES ALSO LIES ON THE DRAW UNIT. THE FRONT COVER SHOWS TWO ANIMATED MALES EMBRACING EACH OTHER LOVINGLY. THE TITLE OF THE BOOK READS:

"My Strange Roommate"

MID SHOT: BOYFRIEND'S EXPRESSION BECOMES MORE CONFUSED. HE LOOKS BEHIND HIM AND THEN BACK TO THE BOOK WITH A NOW CURIOUS LOOK. HE DOESN'T WANT TO GET CAUGHT SNOOPING THROUGH HIS GIRLFRIEND'S STUFF.

CLOSE UP: BOYFRIEND'S HANDS HESITANTLY REACHES FORWARD AND SLOWLY PEELS THE BOOK OPEN.

MID SHOT: BOYFRIEND OPENS THE BOOK BUT SUDDENLY GETS SUCKED IN.

EXTREME CLOSE UP: ON BOYFRIEND'S CLOSED EYES. HE SNAPS THEM OPEN AND LOOKS AROUND.

EXT: 2D LOUNGE APARTMENT.

MID SHOT: BOYFRIEND LOOKS AROUND THE AREA. SURPRISED AND SLIGHTLY FRIGHTENED. HE PATS HIMSELF AND IS RELIEVED THAT NOTHING SEEMS TO BE WRONG WITH HIM. A DEEP CHUCKLE MAKES HIM SHARPLY LOOK UP WITH SURPRISE. AN ANIMATED EXCLAMATION POINT APPEARS AT THE TOP OF HIS HEAD.

LONG SHOT: A HANDSOME 2D MAN SITS CASUALLY ON A LONG COUCH WITH HIS LEGS CROSSED. HE SMIRKS AT SEEING THE BOYFRIEND'S SURPRISED FACE. 

OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT: WE SEE THE 2D MANS' SILHOUETTE RISE FROM THE COUCH AND THE BOYFRIEND'S FACE GETS QUITE NERVOUS, ANIMATED SWEAT STARTS JUMPING OFF HIM AS THE 2D MAN SAUNTERS TOWARDS HIM.

OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT: BOYFRIEND BACKS AWAY BUT HIS BACK HITS THE WALL BEHIND HIM. 2D MAN LEANS CLOSE WHILE HE RESTS HIS HAND AGAINST THE WALL RIGHT BESIDE HE BOYFRIEND'S HEAD. THE 2D MAN CHUCKLES INTO THE BOYFRIEND'S EAR, THE BOYFRIEND STARTS PANICKING AND TRIES TO PUSH THE MAN AWAY, A GIANT SWEAT DROP APPEARS ON THE SIDE OF HIS HEAD, HOWEVER HIS WRISTS ARE CAPTURED BY THE 2D MAN. HE PULLS THE BOYFRIEND TOWARDS HIM AND THEY LOCK LIPS.

OVER THE SHOULDER MID SHOT: BOYFRIEND TEARS AWAY FROM THE 2D MAN, HE SCREAMS DRAMATICALLY WHILE RUNNING TO THE OTHER SIDE OF THE ROOM, HS ARMS FLYING AROUND. 

MID SHOT: BOYFRIEND TRIES TO OPEN A RANDOM DOOR BUT IT IS LOCKED. HE LOOKS BACK TO THE OTHER SIDE OF THE ROOM AT THE 2D MAN.

MID SHOT: 2D MAN LOOKS BACK AT HIM CONFUSED.

MID SHOT: BOYFRIEND TURNS BACK TOT THE DOOR WHILE SCREAMING DRAMATICALLY AGAIN. HE STARTS TO POUND ON THE DOOR DESPERATELY AND SUDDENLY FALLS FORWARD.

EXT: GIRLFRIEND'S ROOM

LONG SHOT: BOYFRIEND LAYS, SPRAWLED ON THE GROUND. HE LOOKS AROUND AND LETS OUT A RELIEVED SIGH AS HE REALISES HES BACK.

MID SHOT: HIS HEAD SNAPS TO THE GROUND.

CLOSE UP: THE BOOK LAYS ON THE GROUND BESIDE HIM. THE 2D MAN HE MET IS NOW ALONE ON THE BOOK COVER, WINKING.

MID SHOT: BOYFRIEND'S FACE TURNS ANGRY.

INT: FRONT OF HOUSE

LONG SHOT: BOOK IS SEEN BEING THROWN OUT THE BEDROOM WINDOW

Script Rough Idea

• Set in present day
• scene starts in wife/girlfriend's room

• Husband walks into wife/girlfriend's room, looking for keys or something

While searching the room he stumbles upon a yaoi manga - (also known as Boys' Love (BL), a Japanese genre of fictional media focusing on romantic relationships between male characters, typically aimed at a female audience)

• His first reaction is wtf? but hes curious (lol) so he takes a look anyway but suddenly gets sucked in

  NOTHING EXPLICIT IS GOING TO HAPPEN!!! RELAX!!!

Anyway that's all I have so far.

Problems

• Don't have a middle or end yet
• Why is only the brother sucked into the manga?
• Why does wife/girlfriend have a magical BL manga?
• How does the experience affect the boyfriend/husband?

Well that's all I got......